The Glitter Kitten ([info]aeslis) wrote in [info]jent_fanfics,
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[Fic] -- Arashi -- Promise 47

Title: Promise 47
Group/Pairing: Arashi/Ohmiya
Notes: More practice fic. Unbeta'd; if you catch any grammatical mistakes, please feel free to let me know. Again, a drabble that didn't want to be a drabble. I'm good at that.




"Aren't you done yet?" Nino is moping; Ohno has been wearing his patience thin for the last forty five minutes at least. He didn't think it was possible to take so long to build a sandcastle, but apparently he was wrong.

"No." Ohno doesn't look up from the sand. He's concentrating, crouched low. His fingers, covered with salt-and-pepper grains, are delicately shaping windows.

Nino is absolutely positive that he'll have to take two showers. There's sand in the most inappropriate places, not to mention between his toes and in his hair. "Why do you have to build it on top of me?"

"Because I like Nino to be part of the things I do." Ohno does pause now, flashing Nino a smile. It has the hint of deviousness in it that usually leads to things like throwing water balloons at Aiba, or mixing up Jun's hair gel, or an Ohmiya SK skit.

Nino sighs. "Hurry up." He wiggles his toes; a tower wobbles precariously, and then a small avalanche occurs; Ohno makes a sound of protest and sets about fixing it, taking no heed of Nino's demand.

So Nino stares upwards, letting his mind drift. The sun is hidden behind a scudding cloud, but even so he has to squint for the brightness. There's a bird spinning in lazy circles that he can see if he tilts his head back just a bit.

There are other things he wishes that Ohno were doing with his hands. In his head, he starts listing them: one, two, three, four. He's positive Ohno has no idea what he's thinking about.

"You owe me, you know," Nino says, giving up on watching the bird.

"Dinner?" Ohno sounds distracted.

"No." Nino pauses purposefully. "Kisses. One for each minute you keep me pinned down here."

He can feel Ohno's eyes on him, then. He tries to meet the gaze, but the angle is rather awkward, and if he lifts his head his neck starts to hurt. In retrospect, it feels a little silly to have demanded such a thing; Ohno couldn't possibly say--

"Okay."

"Eh? What? Really?" And who cares if his neck hurts, he's got to look at Ohno right now, even though he knows exactly what expression is on Ohno's face anyway. Though he's surprised by that as well: Ohno actually looks a bit sheepish, and maybe, possibly, a little shy. "...That's forty-five kisses, Ohchan!"

"Do you have a timer in your head?"

"No, I have a watch on." Nino checks it again, even though he doesn't have to, and shows it to Ohno. "Forty-seven, actually."

Ohno nods solemnly. "Okay." And then he goes back to finishing up his sandcastle, a tiny smile on his face.

"...Okay." And so Nino falls back, arms stretching above his head, feeling, suddenly, very pleased with himself, the world, and even the sand weighing him down. He settles down to wait, patient in a way he didn't know he could be. After all, every minute longer is just one more kiss, and Nino intends to make Ohno pay up for each and every one.
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[info]makichan

November 9 2006, 05:54:29 UTC 5 years ago

Awwwww, cute!! x3 I never mind when drabbles don't want to be drabbles 8D In fact, I prefer it that way ;D Yay Ohmiya~~! xD

[info]aeslis

November 9 2006, 06:24:39 UTC 5 years ago

It's a good thing, definitely. I just wish I could write something even longer, but yanno, for now I can't complain!

And yes: Yay Ohmiya. XD

[info]hontowa

November 9 2006, 05:58:57 UTC 5 years ago

I love it! <3 Such a cute moment ^_^

[info]aeslis

November 9 2006, 06:25:02 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you. :)

[info]chatacat

November 9 2006, 07:37:35 UTC 5 years ago

absolutely gorgeous♥
devious nino haha~

[info]aeslis

November 9 2006, 08:11:30 UTC 5 years ago

I'm not sure if he's devious so much as wins by mistake. XD Thank you!

[info]elfiepike

November 10 2006, 16:15:00 UTC 5 years ago

seriously aes. talk about WAFF of the absolute best variety, ie: ohmiya. :D

[info]aeslis

November 10 2006, 16:32:38 UTC 5 years ago

I might just be a WAFF Queen, Elfie!

[info]windrette

November 10 2006, 16:32:02 UTC 5 years ago

"Do you have a timer in your head?"
"No, I have a watch on."

>> I LOL XD This is so 4realz. Ahahahaha XD Winner lines ♥~

HUWAAAA ;3; This is such a sweet scene! *_* Oh the cuteness, the fluff and the ohmiya! It's soooo sweeeeeeeettt!!!! ♥ ♥ ♥

[info]aeslis

November 11 2006, 14:26:54 UTC 5 years ago

Ahahahah! I'm glad you liked it. XD Ohno can be not-observant sometimes, can't he? :p

Thanks!

[info]windrette

November 21 2006, 10:51:35 UTC 5 years ago

sldkjaklal;asjha!! ♥ I've stumbled upon this fic once again and it brought the same sugary sweetness inside me ;3; ♥ Ohmiya is the cutest form of fluffy love! X3

And Ohno being non-observant makes him utterly adorable!!

[info]aeslis

November 21 2006, 12:15:17 UTC 5 years ago

Oh yay! Thank you for the re-comment. That makes me feel special :D :D

[info]elly87

January 18 2008, 05:46:26 UTC 4 years ago

i just love these kind of fluffness!!...

[info]everystarrfall

July 9 2008, 11:44:30 UTC 3 years ago

Take your time, Oh-chan~ 47 kisses--this was adorably adorable. Squared. ♥

[info]lilshokolatte22

August 2 2008, 20:45:35 UTC 3 years ago

GAHHHHHHHHH!!!! XD

so......effing.....CUTE. i love love love LOVEEEED this. alkjasfdlkjasfdlkjasfdlkjaslfkjaslfkjasdfljksadf. so cute. ohmiya = <3

[info]sundaecone

August 27 2008, 15:53:34 UTC 3 years ago

OHMIYA WHY SO ADORABLE?! *weeps* ♥

[info]ggumilgeoya

July 6 2010, 00:22:51 UTC 1 year ago

omo ... this was so cute ... and now I really want to read a fan fiction that tells more about the kisses afterwards ^^

[info]ichi_toshimiya

August 29 2011, 14:43:45 UTC 9 months ago

Aaaaaw cute.... fufufu

[info]cleotine

September 5 2011, 09:54:49 UTC 8 months ago

Just cute~

[info]cleotine

September 5 2011, 09:55:11 UTC 8 months ago

I wouldn't mind waiting for Ohno then ^^
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