The Glitter Kitten ([info]aeslis) wrote in [info]jent_fanfics,
  • Music: Cocco - Natsuiro

Fic: 夏色 : Natsuiro

Fic: 夏色 : Natsuiro
Band: Arashi
Pairing: Ohmiya
Notes: This fic is too short for me to write a summary; it's more about imagery than plot. Please enjoy!


Sometimes it happens in summer, in the evenings when the sun is gone and a comfortable, warm dark sits heavy in the air. The windows and balcony doors stand wide open, and a small windchime trills and tings and twinkles in the lightest breeze.

"Here, Captain," Nino says, and two bowls of strawberry shaved ice are placed on the table. Nino has a Doraemon shaved ice maker; the second summer on his own, Aiba purchased it for him, saying no home was complete without. Nino uses it the most frequently on nights like these, when Ohno comes over and they're lazy and lethargic from the heat. "Don't eat it too fast or your brain will freeze and you need it tomorrow. Eat up!"

The bowls are glass, and textured, and fit right in the palm of Nino's hand. The next five minutes are all about quiet, the clinking of spoons, the crunch of ice. The syrup is sweet, and slides down Nino's throat before he wants it to.

After a while: "Leader," Nino ventures, focused intently on the pink puddle in his bowl that used to be ice. The inside of his mouth is cold, but there's summer sweat on the back of his neck.

Ohno's grunt is passable as a response.

"We should probably go to bed." It's coming on midnight, and there's filming in the morning; movies to be made, an interview to go to. Nino enjoys their work more often than not, but it's on nights like these that he wishes his schedule weren't quite so rigorous--it's nice to just relax, sometimes, with Satoshi, and not worry about things like that.

Ohno nods, though, and they both rise. Ohno closes the windows while Nino puts the dishes in the sink; in the morning they'll be sticky, but he doesn't want to wash them now. They walk down the hall together hand in hand, past a photograph of Nino's sister and mother hung on the drab wooden wall.

Nino's room is stuffy, clothes scattered over the floor and the bed unmade. He sheds his shirt and lets it fall; Ohno does the same, till they're both down to their boxers, crawling in bed together. It's too hot to get under the covers so instead they twine together in the open air, Nino's chin on Ohno's shoulder, Ohno's hand low on Nino's back. Nino relishes the feel of Ohno's skin: so real and immediate, pliant and smooth.

They kiss without even thinking about it, slow and easy. Ohno tastes like strawberry still, like sugar, his tongue and the hidden places of his mouth. Nino feeds off the sweetness.

The night could last forever, and Nino wouldn't mind.

"Oyasumi ne, Ohchan."
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[info]elfiepike

June 27 2006, 02:16:47 UTC 5 years ago

FIRST. ahaha, ahem.

i love it, so much. and you know it. and you know why. seriously, this is excellent.

now: write more things with plot! that are longer! :D

[info]aeslis

June 27 2006, 02:22:20 UTC 5 years ago

Plot? D:

[info]elfiepike

June 27 2006, 07:14:08 UTC 5 years ago

don't make that face at me. look at me, i am BRIMMING WITH PLOT, please, please, take some. feel free! we can workshop.

or, you know, just write a lot of things like this. *.* (basically, write things! lots of things! so i will have lots of aes!things to read!)

[info]yuki84

June 27 2006, 08:40:13 UTC 5 years ago

uwa O_O
*adds to memories*
*goes off drawing and writing*

[info]aeslis

June 27 2006, 17:17:00 UTC 5 years ago

:o *got added to memories* *impressed* Thank you :D

[info]yuki84

June 28 2006, 12:00:19 UTC 5 years ago

I should thank you for giving me inspiration ^_^
(And it was a REALLY REALLY GOOD writing. It was natural to add it! :P)

[info]dio_elaclaire

June 27 2006, 10:36:41 UTC 5 years ago

A.b.s.o.l.u.t.e.l.y f.a.n.t.a.s.t.i.c.!

I swear I could really feel the heat and the laziness of that night in the story. Not only because it's so hot in my place I'm wet from the sweat *giggles* I mean it, your descriptions really worked along with my imagination and I can't describe how pleasant the feeling was.

The bowls are glass, and textured... - that's my absolutely favorite paragraph. I felt as if I were there, eating ice-cream and looking at the bowl in Nino's palm.

But I don't particularly like the word 'sits' in the first line. It's too... simple? Simplicity is a good thing, just that it kind of ruins the romantic atmosphere *sighs* Not like I really know how I'd replace it, so you should probably leave it and ignore me. I don't even know why I'm saying it.

Anyway. We should all wish Nino more free evenings XD

[info]aeslis

June 27 2006, 17:15:33 UTC 5 years ago

:DDD!! Why thank you! How flattering! I'm so very glad you liked it <3

That paragraph actually bothers me a wee bit, but I won't tell you why, because then maybe it will bother you too. ;) I'm not changing it though, so no worries.

And, really? Too simple? ... Hmmmm... I think it's okay, and I don't know what else I'd put. (But thank you for the critique, it's always interesting to see what other people think of word choice etc!)

We will wish him many more! XD Thanks for commenting!

[info]warumono_yum

June 27 2006, 14:00:46 UTC 5 years ago

uaahhh ;____; *melt* that was sooo.... lovely and perfect!!! was craving ohmiya the whole day today, and ur fic was exactly wat i needed, and made me waaay too happy ^^~ it was like a little snapshot into something so sweet and loving and omgosh i loved it!!!! <33 gaahh~ plz plz write more ohmiya~~? *clings to ur leg* XD

[info]aeslis

June 27 2006, 17:16:33 UTC 5 years ago

Yayyy! I'm so happy I could help! :D Thank you so much!

Believe me, more Ohmiya will be forthcoming. XD No worries!

[info]hontowa

June 27 2006, 20:09:24 UTC 5 years ago

I love you for filling this community with Ohmiya, but I really love you for filling it with just amazingly written ohmiya <3 You nail their characters so well, and I love how such a short, really plotless story can say so much ^_^ I love your writing style, the way its not too over the top with metaphors, but not too simple either. Really, I can't wait to see more fanfiction from you ^_^

[info]aeslis

June 28 2006, 08:14:38 UTC 5 years ago

You're absolutely welcome. :) I hope I don't keep you waiting too long, I have no idea what'll strike me next, but I hope it's good.

[info]_weekend

June 28 2006, 04:47:11 UTC 5 years ago

Beautifully written, it's so easy to feel like you're right there watching them (not in a 'peeking-tom-stalker way').

They kiss without even thinking about it, slow and easy. <--My favorite part. Though the Doraemon ice shaver is a close second. XD

Stunning work as always, and I hope for more Ohmiya! :)

[info]aeslis

June 28 2006, 08:17:10 UTC 5 years ago

I'm really happy it struck you. :)

Thanks for the comment, and trust me, there will be more Ohmiya!

[info]makichan

July 2 2006, 08:11:28 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks for this great fic!! the descriptions were awesome. ^^ There hasn't been much Ohmiya around lately, and I was starting to feel depressed. D: your ficcie cheered me up quite a bit! ^__^ *loves*

[info]aeslis

July 2 2006, 08:33:01 UTC 5 years ago

Happy to be of service!

[info]sundaecone

May 23 2008, 14:11:03 UTC 4 years ago

Why is it that I love the fact that Ohno didn't speak? ♥


And killer last line, by the way. ♥♥♥

[info]ggumilgeoya

April 10 2011, 15:37:28 UTC 1 year ago

their love is just so pure and simple. I love it.
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